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Another Dream-
You can make it;
Pass through shit
To welcome the divine.

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What kind of mind is this?
What kind of perversion?
You don't make much sense to me,
You don't make much sense to them-
You don't make much sense.

Return to painting flowers,
Name flowers flowers,
Name darkness strangeness,
Name genius a vile trait.

We cannot decipher you...
Bend down a little.
Everyone needs their audience-
Who are you to dispute?
Who is it you're talking to?
It can't be to yourself!

Alright. Now...
Everything is illuminated!
(I can write my glossary
Of horror and neglect.)

Do I love you?
Of course I love you,
Nobody else still cares
About the little things,
Such as your senseless self.

(Yes, I'll make everything clear,
The way you want me to.)

Let's speak a new language,
Let's call man the Head,
The alphabet into the globe-
The stud of universe.

(Of course we are the center,
Can't you see?)

Now
Strip.

Stop laughing,
Stop writing-
Stop mocking me!

You are a brilliant little brat,
A ravaging cacophony.
Our instructional order
Of highest aesthetics
Will not put up with this!

Stop laughing I said!
Stop laughing I said!
Stop laughing I said!
Oh, god, this isn't it!
Can this be Art?

Stop laughing I said!
Stop laughing I said!
Stop laughing I said!
Stop ridiculing me!

****************

Another dream.
Passing through
Glorious shit.
I don't belong in here,
And I am proud of this.
Academia Anorgasmia.
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SadoMechanism Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2009
HEY so this is really fucking good.

Poetry that is this cerebral has to be quite assertive I think. It has to have drive and motion and sort of be challenging the reader to catch up.

You do all this. Without pretension. With purpose. Write a hundred more poems and do so without apology.

Cheers mate.
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RaVeNuS9 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2010
Thank you so much :heart:
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nickandrik Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2009
If shit was like this, then all toilets would be libraries!
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RaVeNuS9 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2009
:D
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blisterine66 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2009
good shit
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RaVeNuS9 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2009
:D
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Lilielo-Lawliet Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2009
wow
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RaVeNuS9 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2009
:love:
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thetaoofchaos Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2009   Writer
what's glorious is your ability to make any subject extreme and visceral. if i was still attached to categories i would probably feel curiosity about your categorization of this as prose - but i know it matters not. as far as satire goes, this is of the screaming variety.



;)
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RaVeNuS9 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2009
Thank you sweetie :aww: Well, yes, it can be taken as poetry, but I mostly felt it was closer to prose..
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